Friday, October 7, 2011

POEM

FALL
It means Halloween, hunting season, and tons of fun 
It is leaves falling on your shoulders
It's cool mornings that remind you that winter's coming 
you think of cold and misery but then you think of good times sledding snowball fights and hot chocolate 
fall is colorful 
This is fall 






7 comments:

  1. I think you sort of got off-topic by saying all that stuff about winter, but other than that it was great.

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  2. I like the story but I am not sure why you incorporated winter.

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  3. You know, when I looked at your title, it seemed pretty informal, sort of like this was a blog for fun, and not school. Think about getting rid of the smile things.

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  4. very descriptive, i loved that you put hunting season in, very, very good

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  5. good job changing templates, thanks -Kevin Rentz

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  6. We all enjoy that you put pirate theme on your blog. It really shows your school spirit. Good Job

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  7. Now it looks FANTABULOUS!
    yes i meant it to sound stupid

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