Author's Note: In this piece I used imagery and figurative language like similes and metaphors to really set the mood of suspense.
The steel glinting in the gloved hand of a killer. The black trench coat holding death inside. Was this it, was the man was to finish my like this. I try to run but my feet are cement blocks. I try to swing but my arms are dead weight. There is nothing to do but accept death. The man swings the dagger in an arc driving it deep into my chest. Blood pouring out of me like rain. Leaving it there for me to suffer. I collapse to the ground trying to keep my grip on life as death tries to pull it away. I pull the dagger out of my body knowing I have only seconds left. Dagger in hand I throw it with all the life I have sticking it into the back of the killers head. Death drags me away as I watch the man fall like a stone.
Friday, March 1, 2013
Monday, February 18, 2013
Gun Control
There have been huge arguments lately on the topic of gun control laws. People say make it hard for everyone to get a gun. You can't only do that you have to take other things into consideration. If you want to reduce gun violence in the US you need to test mental health, control the black market, and monitor the
AR-15 style rifles very closely.
A big pattern that is occurring with these shootings is a persons mental stability. Many of the shootings lately have been by people who are just crazy. They feel like it would be cool to shoot people and cause tragedy. There should be tests in place that test the mental stability of the customer buying a gun. Just having background checks isn't enough. The thing is, usually these shootings are done be people who could easily pass a background check. They aren't felons until they start shooting.
If a felon wanted a gun they usually don't walk into a gun shop. They know they won't pass a background check. When they want a gun they go to the black market or buy one off of a friend. If the government can control these exchanges and underground businesses there wouldn't be as many of these guns being passed around causing mayhem. The guns are easy to get and usually cheap. Why wouldn't they go there?
The next thing that the government needs to do is monitor the AR-15 type guns that are causing these shootings. In my opinion these AR-15's should only be used in law enforcement. Yet there is always the collectors. There are these people who have huge collections of guns. They can sell them to anyone they want. The government should keep track of who owns assault weapons and have regular checks on where they are.
The shootings we've had lately have rocked our country. We can figure out ways to solve many of these problems without banning guns completely. All this country has to do is sit back and think.
AR-15 style rifles very closely.
A big pattern that is occurring with these shootings is a persons mental stability. Many of the shootings lately have been by people who are just crazy. They feel like it would be cool to shoot people and cause tragedy. There should be tests in place that test the mental stability of the customer buying a gun. Just having background checks isn't enough. The thing is, usually these shootings are done be people who could easily pass a background check. They aren't felons until they start shooting.
If a felon wanted a gun they usually don't walk into a gun shop. They know they won't pass a background check. When they want a gun they go to the black market or buy one off of a friend. If the government can control these exchanges and underground businesses there wouldn't be as many of these guns being passed around causing mayhem. The guns are easy to get and usually cheap. Why wouldn't they go there?
The next thing that the government needs to do is monitor the AR-15 type guns that are causing these shootings. In my opinion these AR-15's should only be used in law enforcement. Yet there is always the collectors. There are these people who have huge collections of guns. They can sell them to anyone they want. The government should keep track of who owns assault weapons and have regular checks on where they are.
The shootings we've had lately have rocked our country. We can figure out ways to solve many of these problems without banning guns completely. All this country has to do is sit back and think.
Sunday, February 17, 2013
Winter
When winter hits it drives us inside
but not for long as
it breaths fall a cold goodbye
the days are short
the nights are long
the snow starts falling down
a warm fire is built
hot chocolate is made
and snowmen pop up too
the ski hills begin to open
people zooming down
kids build forts
and stash their snowballs
waiting for someone to come around
everyone is merry
ice fishers on the lake
people say that winter is bad
but I say that's a mistake
but not for long as
it breaths fall a cold goodbye
the days are short
the nights are long
the snow starts falling down
a warm fire is built
hot chocolate is made
and snowmen pop up too
the ski hills begin to open
people zooming down
kids build forts
and stash their snowballs
waiting for someone to come around
everyone is merry
ice fishers on the lake
people say that winter is bad
but I say that's a mistake
Monday, January 21, 2013
Point of View
Single Combat
“Hold your ground men it’s
about to get bloody,” I yelled.
“Sir, Paris of Troy has
called for anyone to take him on in single combat,” said my lieutenant.
Hearing this I roused my
horses and powered to the frontline to see the scoundrel’s surprised face. I
watched him sink back into his lines as I leaped out of my chariot.
“Is he afraid to fight me for
what is truly mine”
“He is not afraid of a man
who isn’t worthy to be a king,” shouted Hector from the Trojan lines
“What then, did he see a
field mouse”
Hearing this my entire
frontline burst out laughing. Then Paris emerged from the Trojans with armor
that barely fit him.
“ What are the conditions Sir
Paris”
“If I win your army leaves to
where they came”
“And if you lose”
“Helen is yours”
“Fair enough”
“Hold on we must make it true
to the gods, bring two lambs from the city and build an altar,” said Hector
Then he pulled out his sword and began to draw
the fighting area. My men built the altar and the lambs were sacrificed. Hector
put our names in a helmet to decide who had the first cast of the spear.
Paris’s name was picked. He cast his spear. It sped towards me, heading straight
at my chest. It would have easily killed me if I hadn’t raised my shield. The
point of his spear was blunt and harmlessly bounced off.
“Great Zeus! Grant me my
rightful vengeance on this man who did me foul wrong, even while he ate my salt
and slept beneath my roof!” I yelled at the top of my lungs.
Then I cast my spear with all
my might at the man who stole my wife. It pierced his shield like butter, broke
through his breastplate and came to a halt just before it pierced skin. My
spear should have gone straight through him but as I threw he had dived to the
side saving a fatal wound and leaving a spear head stuck in his tunic.
I was mad and not just mad
but furious. I pulled out my great sword and swung at his head. As my sword met
the bronze comb of the lucky kid’s helmet it shattered into four pieces. Paris
became dazed by the blow so I pounced on him in rage and drug him by the helmet
to our lines to finish him. Then the helmet strap broke by some kind of magic
and I flung the helmet into my men but when I turned to finish him he was gone.
“Has he become afraid. Does
the little boy not want to fight any longer.” I beckoned to the Trojan lines.
“Does this mean a Greek victory?”
Asked my lieutenant aloud.
But we were answered by the
sound of armor being fastened.
Tuesday, January 15, 2013
The Beach
The waves stop you.
The soft sand holds down your feet.
the warm breeze stunts you
The crimson horizon captures you.
You can't escape the beach
It can't escape you
The soft sand holds down your feet.
the warm breeze stunts you
The crimson horizon captures you.
You can't escape the beach
It can't escape you
Tuesday, December 18, 2012
Who Said You Were in Charge
Author's Note: this is a theme essay about the theme of government takeover in three books. The Hunger Games, Divergent, and Fahrenheit 451
Government takeover is a theme used in many books. Many
authors use it to create action or adventure stories about rebellion. I found
that this theme was in the Hunger Games, Divergent and Fahrenheit 451.
There is an obvious theme
of Government takeover in the Hunger
Games. No one is free unless you live in the Capital. The government
controls everything and everyone in the districts. Not to mention that every
year they terrorize the districts by taking away their children. Then they go
make them fight to the death on national television. President Snow is the
driving force behind this. He thinks of not even having the hunger games and
just executing the tributes on the spot. All to make the districts bow down to
him and give him anything he wants.
Unlike making their people fight to the death, in Divergent they have a different system.
Everyone has a faction and that faction determines what you do with your life.
Even though people have the choice of their faction, if they choose to change
factions they never get to see their family again. You only have a small amount
of job choices. Not to mention that the government tries to keep the people in
the city, when they say they are trying to keep evil out.
Fahrenheit 451 has
the same theme but with a different twist. The government has major control.
They create strict rules on what people can and can’t have. Particularly books.
If someone gets caught with books, they are sent to jail and their books are
burned. The government has the power to modify any situation, like at the end
of the book. They send a search for Montag and when they don’t find him they
kill random man walking down the street to avoid embarrassment.
Thursday, November 29, 2012
Hunting
Do you love the outdoors or
just want to get out more? Then I encourage you go out and try hunting. It’s
exciting, a good way to try new things and great for those times when you just
need to get away.
If you want to get your
adrenaline pumping, one of the best things to do is big game hunting. That
probably doesn’t sound like a lot of fun but trust me when that big deer steps
out your heart is going a mile a minute. There is always the feeling of never
knowing when your opportunity to shoot will come. It just adds to the
excitement. You also never know what is going to happen while you are out
hunting. Who knows, you might witness something amazing.
Along with the excitement
involved in hunting, you get to try many new things. Shooting guns, shooting
bows, trying new meats, seeing new terrain and so much more. When you shoot for
the first time you are hooked the instant the trigger is pulled. People always
worry about kick on a gun but when you have your sights on an animal you don’t
feel a thing. Once you can shoot, you get to eat what you’ve shot. That is the
best part. I’ve always loved wild meats they are just way better than the
normal meats you get. The reasons, they are fresh, lean, and have more natural
flavor. Studies actually show that fresh meats like this are better for you
than store bought meats.
Overall hunting can be really
good for your health. Between confidence, healthier foods and walks though the
natural terrain it can really help. Trust me walking through the woods burns a
lot more calories than walking on a flat sidewalk.
Of all the things hunting can
do for you many people love it for one big reason. It helps your mental health.
Think about it. If you’re in the woods you don’t have to worry about people or
jobs or school. You are just hunting and it gives your brain some time to
relax.
Hunting can be very good for
you in many ways and it could be bad, it mainly depends on the person. Sure
it’s not for a lot of people but it sure is for me. The last thing I want to
say is that it’s stupid when people hate on hunting. Don’t tear down something
until you’ve actually tried it.
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